[racchabanda] రచ్చబండ కవితలు


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విరియు సరోజని నిధిమధుభాండపు పానపు మధుప సునాదమ్

అరయు మయూరి మయూర వయారపు పింఛపు నటన వినోదమ్

దరియు సువాంఛల ముఖమండలఛాయల చెలువల అనుమోదమ్

మెరియు మహామదధీరత పడతుల గూడెడి పురుష ప్రమోదమ్.  




Metrical pattern used and word breaks in the lines do not coincide, in my verse above. Which is the right thing to do.  To know why and what are some recognized musical and sensuous usages of rhymes and words, Please Refer to Barbara Stoler Miller's  book – The Gitagovinda of Jayadeva, Love Song of the Dark Lord  -Introduction page 12, in particular, paragraph Four. Syncopations are highly valued in jazz, hip-hop and rap to this day.


Even though Gita govindam, is one big pleasure pot, and will remain so forever, this copy-cat poem has no erotic value.  It does diddly-squat. Just a pain in the neck exercise, for no good reason, in my opinion. 


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